
Written for this week’s Twittering Tales prompt from Kat Myrman. Photo credit: Nathan Dumlao at Unsplash.com.
View to the pool
David’s curiosity and lust were unstoppable, as it is the case for most teenagers who have received a repressive education. He could not refrain his attraction for what was going on around the swimming-pool below the terrace. The sensuality of these tanned bodies was untenable!
(278 characters)
🇬🇧 I find this writing challenge quite fun and intriguing. Can you add to my flash story, stemming from the same image prompt, with the same constraint of a max of 280 characters, in the comments to this post? Feel free to add in any format you prefer and in languages other than English. This could be an interesting experiment of collective writing!
🇮🇹 Trovo questa sfida di scrittura abbastanza divertente e intrigante. Puoi aggiungere alla mia microstoria, ispirata dallo stesso prompt di immagine, con lo stesso vincolo di un massimo di 280 caratteri, nei commenti a questo post? Sentiti libero di aggiungere in qualsiasi formato che preferisci e in lingue diverse dall’inglese. Questo potrebbe essere un interessante esperimento di scrittura collettiva!
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He looked at his reflection in the window, slowly his hand on hi stomach: the belly, those kilos extra his saw as hi limit, finally disappeared. Or maybe, he just changed the way to look at himself!
confident in himself, he joined the other at the swimming-pool…
David was now immersed participant in the scene of which he was just before a spectator. He could feel more strongly the sensuality of the bodies he was admiring before from a distance and felt comfortable in being part of it. He simply chose a good view point in the shade.
Excellent snapshot of teenage angst and raging hormones. Well done!
He’s typical, checking out the girls
Well, nobody wrote it was the girls he was lookign at 😉